We
like to get reader response to our stories. Here's a sampling of early
comments that folks have sent in about earlier 'rough draft'
versions we had been previewing online.
We're building a story
library for you - check back again to see what's new!about Grandfather and the Three Mr. Smith's: from V.
Screeney, VA.-
It took me a while to get around to reading your
story but I enjoyed it when i did. I think one of the hardest things to
write is natural sounding dialogue. You also had enough going on with
thestove and the wind and the comfy chair to set a scene and stir up memories of interactions with my own grandparents. I also enjoyed the fact that you were able to get the "message" across without being preachy or predictable by encouraging us to guess along with the kids as to just what the grandfather was up to with his parable/story. Do you expect to mount it as a play at your church? Keep on writin', Bud. from P. Wheelock, NY- little more concise. from C. Mann, TN- from B. Hasson, VA- about Mary's Christmas: from S. Howard,
NC-
A beautiful story. I wish more people understand
the real meaning of Christmas.from B. Hasson, VA- from H. Campbell, VA- from V. Teachout, NY- from R. Sly, NY- from E. Lister,
OH-
I read the review & comments page before I
read any stories to my daughters. Most of them were wonderful. About
Mary's Christmas, because it is a Christmas story I thought what she
did was possible. If it was a true story, that would only make the
story more charming. My daughters (the oldest is seven) often believe
they can do more than they actually can. They thought Mary was brave
and very smart. Thank you for your stories. Please write some more!about Mr. Gode's Garden: from H. Smith,
FL-
I didn't know what I was reading at first,
whether it was fantasy or something silly. After I read your comments
at the end, I went back and "saw" things you were leading up to.
Very good!If permitted to us, reviews of stories are sometimes posted here as they are received. A sincere 'thank you!' to all who have written, and for your kind comments! |